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Surprise surprise it rolls around
Lights dimensionless unbound
Cause affects the desired effect
Contemplate on what to reflect
A prism splits the course apart
Which path to choose where to start
It's not a game to win or lose
Mind refrained indebted dues
Posted by Richard Handley at 10:22 PM
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This one rather grabbed me, as does your blog in general. Some interesting stuff here!
nice....tight little piece, great end rhymes...i hear confidence in the voice...tight...i like...
very compact, well done.
;)
Beautiful word play.... liked the lines...
'Cause affects the desired effect'
it rather touched me deeply the way you have crafted it... and the feelings you have woven in between.
Thanks for sharing...
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/11/whispers-tears-in-rain.html
Definitely appreciate the feedback from you all. Many thanks.
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